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NORMANSUICIDEPOME by ~norman2:iconnorman2:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Old Poetry Structure > Dark




i was depresed
and wanted it to end
i reeched for the rope
but it was broak

i went to take some pills
but their were no pills
so i walked in front of a car
but the diver stopped the car

so i stuck my finger in a socket
but the braker stopped it
i went off a cliff
but it was to short to be it

i tried to drown
but the plug fel out
i tried a gun
but dad locked up the gun

tried to get eaten by a bear
but the bear wasnt their
so i just gave up
and decided to live
©2002-2009 ~norman2
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Author's Comments

their is so much talk about suicide pomes. i thought i wood take a crak at it. this is the sadest suicide pome of all, it is about a guy who could not sucseed. he is a very pathetic loser and is even more pathetic wen he cant pull this off. he probably hates himself more after he cant do anything rite so this pome is the sadest. i feel bad for the pathetic loser and i hope you do to.

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!mrmxytsplyk Nov 18, 2002, 9:23:05 AM
this is so crazy . how the bear wasnt their.


great job keep on the good work
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~siedhr Nov 18, 2002, 9:23:15 AM
rofl
you know? I'm writing a story with the exact same subject.
Damn!!!!!

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~ilblissli Nov 18, 2002, 9:31:52 AM
LOL you are the best norman

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`ndifference Nov 18, 2002, 9:39:01 AM
That's sad and funny at the same time. Which sums it up nicely, don't you think?

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`pantopicon Nov 18, 2002, 2:19:05 PM
I like the turns in this. Reminds me of a kind of scene that Beckett would write -- the absurdity of the failed attempts and all of that, like Murphy's rocking chair.

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`inennui Nov 19, 2002, 1:26:20 PM
Poor guy.

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~fauxgravity Jan 24, 2003, 5:43:25 AM

It just makes me want to shed a tear or two. Unfortunately I have no eyes.

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!killcapital Apr 19, 2003, 2:55:45 PM
Orgasmic in its intended pun.
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